Thursday, March 14, 2024

Haiku: Ballet Without Movement - ©Theda Bara

Haiku authored ©Theda Bara
Every loss is irreparable, it tears us apart inside

It’s a trapeze with no safety net underneath

It’s ballet without movement!


15 comments:

  1. Friend Theodosia,
    I really liked this Haiku. Selfless and with strength in words.
    Kisses and good weekend!!!

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  2. Oh, you brought the drama to this one! Happy Friday!

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  3. Felicidades Theda, porque no se puede describir de forma más bonita el dolor por la pérdida de alguien o algo, querido o deseado.
    Un abrazo.

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  4. Deep and heartfelt words.
    All losses leave a void in the heart.
    Have a nice weekend

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  5. Todas as perdas são irreparáveis, sem dúvida. Mas piores ainda são aquelas, que não conseguimos superar...
    Excelente Haiku, amiga Theda!
    Deixo os meus votos de um bom fim de semana!
    Beijinhos.

    Mário Margaride


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  6. Bellos y ciertos estos versos.

    Saludos.

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  7. Profundo poema. Tienes razón la vida es un baile a veces lindo otras no. Te mando un beso.

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  8. Amiga, bello y profundo poema, me encanto leerte
    Abrazos linda

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  9. Very good haiku! All the best!

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  10. Palavras cheias de conteúdo e força.
    Gostei muito
    Abraço e brisas doces **

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  11. Muy bueno 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

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